Elevator Pitch
Reflection from last Pitch feedback
What feedback that I felt was most important about my last elevator pitch was how natural I presented myself. I've always struggled when performing while being filmed; however, the feedback that I received from my last pitch seemed to be the opposite. I carried myself in a way that made it seem that I was more natural in my last pitch and this I felt was my most surprising feedback. A lot of the feedback that I received was based on how natural I presented myself and that I was a lot more natural at that time around. Another comment that I received was about my hook being really good for being thought of on the spot. I tried to incorporate a new one this time around to make a little change as well. It was amazing to hear that my pitch was natural because of how much I struggle to keep composure while in front of the camera.
What I changed based on the feedback
I didn't really change a thing because a lot of the comments were positive. The only thing I really changed in this pitch was the hook again because I didn't want to make it seem that I was just repeating that same thing I did for the previous pitch. I definitely felt that I was more comfortable in the camera this time around and that my pitch almost felt memorized and easier to pitch to the camera. Other than those few things, the pitch was good overall and didn't really need much change.
Austin,
ReplyDeleteIt's been pretty cool seeing you progress through the last 3 elevator pitches. This time around, you seemed very natural yet animated. It seemed that you weren't just memorizing a script, but speaking on how you really feel. I did like that you changed your hook.
Austin,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your elevator pitch. I can definitely tell that you have gotten more natural and better at delivering your pitch compared to the first two times. You sounded very professional and made me want to invest in your product. Keep up the good work!
Austin,
ReplyDeleteYour third elevator pitch is very much improved, compared to where you started. You present your pitch in a more natural state, rather than having something completely memorized or having to read from a screen. Good job on pitching this business idea in an authentic way, for that is a strong tactic to persuade others.
Austin,
ReplyDeleteYour improvement is very apparent. This is hugely different from your original pitch! Clearly, you have focused a ton on improving your comfort and flow. Even though you didn't change specific lines in your pitch, I feel like that it has changed a ton. It looks more like you're speaking to the audience, rather than just reading off of a script. I do like how you changed up the hook again, even though it wasn't needed. Keep up the good work, man. You're learning great skills for the real business world.